This is something I wrote myself. After translating last time somehow I felt like writing something so I wrote a fanfic to SAO. I’ve never really written anything myself, except some essays for my English class. I don’t think I’m good at it either.

So I decided to just post it here and see if I should continue~
Feel free to comment and give your opinion.


I didn’t understand, I didn’t understand what was going on at all. I was suddenly teleported to the town centre, and with the sky turning completely red, a giant creature clad in red who claimed to be the GM suddenly appeared.

That alone didn’t surprise me. However, what came from his mouth was more than shocking. Obviously, I refused to believe him at first. I believe I was panicking. Blood was rushing into my head. ‘Is he crazy?’ I thought over and over. Everything felt like a dream. Only one word etched deeply into my mind. “If you die in this game, you die for real”.

‘Did I perhaps hear that wrong?’ I wanted to think like that. Even though I could say that I’m quite fluent enough in Japanese to live here without problem, I’m still not a native speaker. However, I realised that wasn’t the case when everyone started screaming and swearing at the GM who seemed to have lost his mind. I still couldn’t believe it, lost in my own thought. I knew that I wasn’t alone in that regard. “You have to beat all 100 floors or else you’ll be trapped here forever”. Crazy, totally crazy. But for some reason my blood was boiling. I was ashamed to say that, I was actually excited.

‘It couldn’t be that bad right?’ thoughts like that welled up inside me. Isn’t being trapped inside a giant floating castle, a pseudo-fantasy world, every gamers’ dream? I often read this kind of fiction and watch it in anime. Though I couldn’t be more wrong, and it was too late to realise later. Next, the GM told us that every avatar would be reverted to, as close as possible to our real self. Using the calibration data from the nerve gear, an avatar based on our real appearances would be generated.

Everyone started shining and when the light dissipated, avatars which looked completely different, or some quite similar from their original avatars appeared. People who chose to look younger, or older, were exposed. Some were totally hilarious, as cross players were caught red handed and everyone was screaming at each other. “You were a guy?!” Even in this tense situation it still made me grin. However, that smile didn’t last long.

It didn’t take long for me to notice that everyone was staring at me. ‘Are they looking at me? My appearance couldn’t be that bad right? I’m not handsome but I’m not ugly either. At least I believe I’m not.’ I looked around wishing I was wrong, but I can still see people, especially boys, sneaking glances at me.

On a sudden epiphany, I quickly took a mirror out of my inventory and took a good look at my face. A jet-black long lustrous hair, a dazzlingly beautiful but cute face, almost bewitching, and a fair white skin akin to a princess. Big black eyes that charms anyone, and a pair of soft lips which can’t be more alluring. An exquisite foreign face of a stunningly pretty girl was reflected in the mirror.


 

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37 Comments

Nicholas Franklin · May 22, 2018 at 9:41 PM

I like this a lot! Are you thinking about continuing this story?

SnowXaga · December 13, 2017 at 1:17 AM

hi. Just wanted to let you know I read this.

Martin m · August 15, 2017 at 4:35 AM

Can you upload more of this?

Reddu · April 17, 2016 at 8:46 PM

So, I just want to know, if he turned to girl, as gender, or did his appearance just turn to a girl’s?

dgcast16 · April 13, 2016 at 6:43 AM

Great! Keep ’em chapters coming!! Oh, and good work!?

Sylali · April 12, 2016 at 7:24 PM

Also what’s that picture from? It looks familiar

Sylali · April 12, 2016 at 7:19 PM

Oh wth!!! now it works!

    Sylali · April 12, 2016 at 7:22 PM

    I’m Sarahi btw from 02-37

      Aria Red · April 13, 2016 at 10:52 PM

      Ah, so Sarah was Sylali. You’ve been here since the beginning, I think (^_^)

      Sylali · April 14, 2016 at 4:20 AM

      Maybe? Idk lol I think I joined after you were part way though and commented things I saw as I read

      Aria Red · April 14, 2016 at 10:46 AM

      I remember you commenting a lot tho. Maybe because ur username is unique.

      Sylali · April 14, 2016 at 11:40 AM

      xD <3

Sylali · April 12, 2016 at 7:19 PM

I think you should continue, also I agree with Naoki, It would be hilarious if the game made his avatar female based on his looks

ivanatorthegreat · April 12, 2016 at 10:44 AM

Nice fic! I hope you continue writing it~

Naoki · April 11, 2016 at 4:10 PM

As long as it’s gender bender male – female, with interesting story… I SHALT DEVOURETH ITH!!!

necrocookie · April 11, 2016 at 5:02 AM

This seems like something I would enjoy, so I’ll keep following it.

cl0udman · April 11, 2016 at 3:10 AM

I usually hate fanfics but I’ll keep my eye on this one

Okami · April 11, 2016 at 2:30 AM

its actually really good. i hope you continue it.

lowell225 · April 11, 2016 at 1:50 AM

It’s interesting, so I hope you will continue ^^

Rinka · April 11, 2016 at 12:11 AM

This looks pretty good, will add it to my readlist

exqalph03 · April 10, 2016 at 11:06 PM

Go for it~! At least until 10 chapters, then ask again for it.. I myself like this, so hopefully it continues and be as good or improve more, lol.

— Thanks, thanks, thanks~!

    Aria Red · April 10, 2016 at 11:56 PM

    Ah thank you so much ^^
    I will when I find the time to.

      exqalph03 · April 11, 2016 at 12:03 AM

      Np. ^^

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